MGP –Narrative
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One day Lindsey came home from school a little sad, and said Grandma why is Delia so mean to me at school? What do you mean? Grandma replied. Delia keeps on messing with me and my friends during recess.
Delia was Lindsey was next door neighbor, and also her friend she thought. Delia seems to be a different person after school Lindsey told Grandma. At school Delia picks on me at the playground. Delia calls me names and pushes me around, and is always trying to embarrass me in front of my friends. I don’t understand Lindsey said, I thought she was my friend.
Grandma replied, that doesn’t sound like a friend to me. Lindsey said I agree, I don’t think she understands how to be a real friend. Lindsey said, you know Grandma I am not the only one that feels this way. You see Delia is so rude and obnoxious towards people that no one wants to be around her. Delia really has no friends, because she has no manners.
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I think this is a perfect story for manners. Good job:)
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